Thread:Captain rudder guy Kevin1/@comment-27510151-20161018122900/@comment-10905876-20161018224511

Unfortunately, I am going to have to deny your request as of now, based on multiple factors.

Firstly, the only descriptions I've seen of these planets are extremely vague, or worse, scientifically impossible. I cannot approve a planet if I don't have even the slightest description of what it is. Not to mention the scientific inaccuracies in much of the descriptions already given. (Ie, the planet that grows diamonds on the surface cannot be anything but a gas giant, due to the immense heat and pressures needed to create diamonds) This vagueness can cause a multitude of problems, even if you have good intentions now. (The road to hell is paved with good intentions, as I recall) Vagueness of planetary descriptions is part of the reason the Protoss became such a problem, the resources of their system were vaguely defined at best, which allowed for greatly exaggerated resource levels resulting in the number-spamming mess that they became. Not saying AFOH will do that, but someone else could find these planets and say they're perfect for their superfactory.

Secondly, you two are just not experienced enough to undertake the creation of a valid star system. Half the time you guys can't even spell planet correctly, while your scientific explanations are in layman's terms at best, and pseudoscience at worse! Both of your abilities to role play are only very basic, and honestly, working off on your own isn't going to improve those skills without outside guidance. What you need to do is have interaction with others, and perhaps a review of old battles and events. Maybe observe the events going on now with a new alien race arriving, or old battles against the Sith.

However, I am willing, so long as a plausible description is provided, to allow an asteroid cluster or other smaller body to be approved. There might also be a way to provide some small scale conflict, should you desire a low risk combat scenario.

Also, Nimitz, please, put a space after you end a sentence or use punctuation. Proof reading for errors is also a good habit to learn.