Talk:AFOH/@comment-27352602-20161020091731/@comment-14850713-20161020140930

OOC: No need as Hoplite Red (highest alert level) has been declared. This means that all forces are ready, so you don't need to make posts similar to the one before this. Now, if you want to redeem yourself with some RP action, I have something for you.

IC:

- Secure & Urgent Transmission to High Command -

In addition to my previous communique, we have also taken steps to secure our territories in the Pacific, starting with the occupation of Palau.

A task force is currently enroute. It's mission is occupy and defend Palau, its government and inhabitants, and anchor our eastern flank.

- Admiral Bouexic

OOC: As you said you want to improve yourself in RP, I will give you some pointers:

1. Write something similar to our occupation of Micronesia (look up Operation Tidal Wave in the Comments).

2. You must choose from the forces already available in SOUTHCOM. Also, the size and composition of the task force must be commensurate with the mission. You're basically taking control of a friendly nation (again, see Operation Tidal Wave).

3. Use correct capitalization and punctuation. Use the present tense.

4. Ship names must be italicized, and unit names must be denoted and capitalized correctly (ex. 2nd Marine Division).

5. No nonsense and personal comments (like the ones you usually make).

This is to address all the points raised by Kevin with regards to your inexperience in RP (also Skynet, but he's done much better I must say and others think so too). Do things properly and you will start to be taken seriously.