User blog comment:Admiral Phoenix/The Arda System/@comment-27797576-20150227171521

I'll point out some flaws right now.

1. Fluroantimonic acid is a synthetic material, and can't be formed in nature(and if it does, only in trace amounts). I can see some being there, but a WHOLE PLANET? That's way to much.(plus your giving Tato a method to all the whole RP if he decides to want to.)

2. The make-up of Anstarth suggests it's a star, yet it's labeled as a planet? It would have to be a failed star for that make-up to even be possible, but the tungsten and iron says it's burned all the way to Red gaint stage, so I don't think that would be possible. Also, you can't float on any of the said materials with the materials navies will typically use(liquid helium is not as good as water floating wise, in fact, rocks would fall through, so you expect us to be able to make a base there? And plasma would melt any object that is in it or on it.)

3. Your not allowed to have tech that is salvagable on a planet, you can have stuff that help, but not the tech itself. For example, on tenelapis, there is animals that help with research with bio-tech, but not the actual tech needed to make it, like a gene changer machine or the like.

4. I don't think your allowed to introduce sientent aliens on a planet unless you turn it into a navy, which I don't think will be allowed.

5.It's impossible to get the pressure required to make Esnara rain diamonds without a magnitude greater than the pressure at Jupitur's core, which is the amount required to get it to rain diamonds, because the time required to make diamonds from several 10's of km under earth's crust(getting into the mantle of earth) is MILLIONS of years, not the matter of hours you can get rain.