Talk:AFOH/@comment-27510151-20161126004335/@comment-14850713-20161203040349

OOC: This has started to get confusing. Skynet, I suggest you edit your posts for capitalization (ex. names, etc.) and punctuation (to distinguish sentences, quotes from characters) so the scenario is clear. Also, you have introduced a new faction in RP (these are humans, but from where?), but have not established how the Blackrock could've been there without any navy/country detecting it. What is its form? Is it a hollow asteroid-type thing. Are the soldiers fighting in an atmosphere? I will give you a chance to do these in an RP post. Normally, we don't just go in with guns blazing, and a bit of IC intel (in the form of a brief background or description) is required.

IC:

In the bridge if ATF Viking's flagship, the battleship Dante, the communications officer sits up and turns to his commander.

Comms: "Sir, we're being hailed. It's Saturn Command.

Before the task force commander, Rear Adm. Skynet, can answer the command screen fills up with the face of Vice Admiral Ej, head of Saturn Comnand.

"Skynet," the senior admiral begins,"The High Command is getting concerned about the Blackrock situation. It seems we've launched an assault with limited or non-existent intelligence on our adversary, and have suffered casualties in the process. You are ordered to pull out your forces and send a detailed update of your operations before we decide how we will proceed."

The screen goes blank.