User blog comment:SpicyViper/Personal RP Reference not for (NAVIES OR FLEETS REFERENCE)/@comment-24882568-20170110193044

... That is very

very

very hard to read.

I have no clue what you were trying to do with this... If this is some creative writing write-up, it's terrible. First and foremost, please please please make it not have the black text. White text is so much easier to read on a darker backround such as the one BSCN has. Secondly, use some paragraphing! I can understand having something which goes on forever and ever in terms of reading, but you litteraly have 3 blocks, no, UNINTERUPTED WALLS of text, with a smaller one at the beginning. That combined with the black text on a dark-ish backround makes it very hard to read. I can tolerate incorrect grammar, spelling, and logic jumps, but it's very hard to read with no paragraphs to break up the content, and black text.