Talk:Millennium/@comment-24787182-20150626141520/@comment-10905876-20150629035411

OOC: Boony, I've told you before, separate dialogue out!

For example:

Langley arrives near the main coalition command base with the AIF Intrepid, Vicksburg and, Discovey with full wings of F-65's. He then radios to coalition command:

"So when are we going to start this party?"

Notice that I put the dialogue in quotation marks, separated it from the action post, and capitalized the start. Put it in quotes because it is someone speaking. Separating it down from the action is just to make it easier to read, but not essential. I capitalized this because it is a new sentence, and therefore should be capitalized.